请帮我改改语法错误

xuerzj.

这是我写的邮件内容，请大家帮我看看，改改语法错误。谢谢大家了。
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When we prepare test data in the sample ptp file, we'd better not to use the original data but replace them to new ones. It would make you much easier to find whether the execution result is right or not. Otherwise, using the original data might make you judge the test result wrongly.
For example, some result field value should be equal to the value of ptp file field A. Use the original sample file to test and the result is correct, but in fact the result field value does not come from field A but field B. It just happened that the values of field A and B are same. This test way makes you pass the test case wrongly. If we modify the value of field A, we can easily find this defect.
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Since I have no much work to do these days, I wonder if I could have a chance to learn some skills about environment installation in my free time. You know I am not familiar with Unix, Linux, WAS and DB2, but I am very eager to grasp these skills. I hope I could help you guys when the environment installation tasks are urgent and I am anxious to enhance my ability too. I have read some documents these days, but the content is too wide and I made little progress without operating in the real environment. And I think learning something in the work is better, as it will be quick and practical. So I need your help and wonder if there is some environment can be used to practise. Of course, maybe you have some other advice, please tell me. Thank you:-)

jingsun.

呵呵，能看懂。。

xyliu925.

When we prepare test data in the sample ptp file, we'd better not to use the original data but replace them to new ones. It would make you much easier to find whether the execution result is right or not. Otherwise, BY USING THE ORIGINAL DATA, YOU MIGHT JUDGE THE TEST RESULT INCORRECTLY.

zhengtao.

语法方面没有问题。能看就懂是我的最大的原则。
不过第二篇写得太诚实了。没有必要将自己目前的不足全都暴露出来。在对方看来，你在要求对方帮忙，而没有给他们什么回报，如果我是看信人的话，理由不够充分。

astina.

you'd better not use...
replace them with...
it would  make it much easier...

xuerzj.

谢谢上面的各位：）学到了不少。其他两段估计还有不少错，帮我看看吧：）

小昭.

原帖由 zhengtao 于 2007-11-6 20:57 发表
语法方面没有问题。能看就懂是我的最大的原则。
不过第二篇写得太诚实了。没有必要将自己目前的不足全都暴露出来。在对方看来，你在要求对方帮忙，而没有给他们什么回报，如果我是看信人的话，理由不够充分。
对啊对啊，这个语气有点过于自谦了。不划算。没必要说自己这些天没事情做吧，就说I'm very interested in Unix, Linux, WAS and DB2. If you guys need a hand with environment installation tasks, I will be more than happy to help.......
wrongly-> incorrectly
should be equal to -> should equal to
Use the original sample -> To use the original sample
不过做技术的人英语只要过得去就行了，幸福啊幸福。lz没问题的！

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