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lanstar

As the least five wild Siberian Tiger’s disappearing in north of china, the environmental issue of forest exploitation is gave us more attentions. Illegal hunt is not the only factor can decrease the number of Siberian Tiger, the forest over explication cause the damage of environment is another main issue.
中文意思是： 伴随着最后的5只野生东北虎在东北的消失，森林开发这一环境问题给我们敲响了警钟。非法捕猎不是造成东北虎数量减少的唯一因素，森岭的过度开采造成的生态环境破坏时一个主要问题。

piggy197

连中文读起来都觉得修辞复杂，就更别谈英文了。帮顶。

bulaohu

帮你的就是自认英语好的，所以大家都不敢吭声...

龙须柳

quite a few grammar mistakes, my english is also not good, i can only make the change in the grammar level, not the wording..As the least five wild Siberian Tiger’s disappearing in northern china, the environmental issue of forest exploitation has given us more attentions. The fact of decreasing number of Siberian Tiger is not only the result of illegal hunting, but also the over explication of the forest, which has badly impaired the animal's stable living environment.What bulaohu said discouraged people posting the reply, chinese are humble, but too humble is too mean

lanstar

As the last five wild Siberian Tiger disappeared in north of china, the environmental issue of forest exploitation gives us warning. Illegal hunt is not the only factor that causes decreasing the number of Siberian Tigers, the forest excess exploitation bringing the imbalance of environment is another main issue.改好了

bffbffbff

在lz的基础上进一步做个修改小练习了, 不对的话大家继续指出:As the last 5 wild Siberian Tigers disappeared in Northeastern China,  the forest exploitation issue has aroused people's awareness. Illegal hunting is not the only factor causing this,  the damage to ecological environment brought by over-exploitation of forest  is another main reason.

bulaohu

aroused? man that's raunchy.

bulaohu

原帖由 lanstar 于 2008-4-4 23:15 发表
As the least five wild Siberian Tiger’s disappearing in north of china, the environmental issue of forest exploitation is gave us more attentions. Illegal hunt is not the only factor can decrease the ... 俺也来试试，伴随着最后的5只野生东北虎在东北的消失，森林开发这一环境问题给我们敲响了警钟。非法捕猎不是造成东北虎数量减少的唯一因素，森岭的过度开采造成的生态环境破坏时一个主要问题。With the last 5 Siberian tigers disappearing from China's Northeastern, the warning bell for forest over exploitation has rang. Illegal poaching is not the only reason for the decline of numbers of Siberian tigers. The damage to the ecosystem, caused by over exploitation, is in fact the major cause.

bulaohu

Another try, which won't follow the structure of the Chinese version so strictly:The disappearance of the last 5 Siberian tiger from China's northeastern region has rang the warning bell for forest over-exploitation. Illegal poaching is not the only reason for the decline of Siberian tiger's population in Northeastern China. In fact, the major reason is indeed forest over-exploitation.

bffbffbff

原帖由 bulaohu 于 2008-4-5 02:00 发表
aroused? man that's raunchy. , can anybody else confirm "aroused" is not appropriate here?