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发表于 2014-6-5 04:34:19 | 显示全部楼层

除非申请美国一流商学院.否则680确实够用了. 至少申请个墨大MBA是没有问题的. 当年同考GRE的同学,因为考分不理想(没有上2200,已经很高了.)改考GMAT,拿了710. 去了卡内基麦伦.
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发表于 2014-6-5 05:05:23 | 显示全部楼层

卡内基麦伦是哪里……
汗……我了解的太少了么……
我认识的710拿了英国LSE
居然没去
现在人家后悔死了
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发表于 2014-6-5 06:10:47 | 显示全部楼层

AGSM好像学费巨贵,要5万多奥币吧。
在澳洲是不是最好的MBA课程呢?
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发表于 2014-6-5 06:38:51 | 显示全部楼层

楼主居然没回答我14楼问题额
现在开始day day up 深夜学习 还帮你顶贴....下午睡多了~其实是压力大....
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发表于 2014-6-5 08:13:26 | 显示全部楼层

现在GMAT得作文题目还是那140道吗?我以前有好多模版,比如A不能推出B之类得论述,回头回去找找贴出来。
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发表于 2014-6-5 09:26:29 | 显示全部楼层

偶GMAT考的不错,为避免浪费,lg天天劝我申墨大的phd。可目前为止我一篇论文的没有,能申请到奖学金吗?
不过申请的时候我应该拿到PR和完成偶美国的master了。
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发表于 2014-6-5 10:41:48 | 显示全部楼层

模版部分:
Argument
In this argument the author reaches the conclusion that.... The basis for this recommendation is that.... An additional reason given in support of this recommendation is that...(The author cites...as an example in support of this recommendation). At first glance, the author's argument appears to be somewhat convincing, but further reflection reveals that it omits some important concerns that should be addressed to substantiate the argument.
In the first place,
In the second place,
In the third place,
In conclusion, the author fails to provide adequate justification for.... As it stands, the reasoning does not constitute a logical argument in favor of the recommendation. To strengthen the argument, the author would have to provide evidence to prove that.... To better assess the argument, we need additional detailed information about...so that we can establish the conclusion whether....
Issue
The issue of whether...is a complex and controversial one. Different people hold different views due to their respective angles. On the one hand, as is well-known and has often been advocated, ...; on the other hand, others probably insist that.... We do not have to look very far to see the valid standpoint of this matter. In the following analysis, I would like to reason and provide evidence favoring the former one and refuting the latter one. (The complex nature of the above issue requires us to consider it on a case-by-case basis. In my point of view, whether one has advantages over the other depends on the specific circumstances.)
In the first place, the important reason that can be presented to develop my position is that.... A good example may be found in the case that.... Under this circumstance/therefore, it is obvious that....
In addition, there is another reason for me to choose the former statement/consider the latter statement to be wrong. The reason is not far to seek:.... To illustrate, a case in point in this respect is that....
Admittedly, there is no denying that...in some conditions. As we know, .... However, this alone does not constitute a sufficient support to.... (When...of X and Y are carefully compared, the most striking conclusion is obvious. To sum up, while...may be true in exceptional cases, I agree that....)
Consequently, I advocate that..., because: (1) ...; (2) .... Due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine to form an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, we may safely arrive at the conclusion I support.
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发表于 2014-6-5 12:21:42 | 显示全部楼层

Argument之七宗罪
第一宗罪:无因果联系
The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification. The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B, the former event is responsible for the latter. (The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality. However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.) But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been considered and ruled out. For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D.
第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample
The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it. One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion (The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily a good indicator of future trends), unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A. It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B is completely unwarranted.
第三宗罪: 错误类比 (based on a false analogy )
The argument rests on the assumption that A is analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak, since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well. For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do....
第四宗罪 all things are equal
The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”. The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that.... The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same at different times or at different locations. However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at AA are the same as they used to be two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that....
第五宗罪 Either-Or choice
The author assumes that AA and BB are mutually exclusive alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground. However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice. Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results.
第六宗罪 survey is doubtful
The poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative. The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access the validity of the results. For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded, the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered, the results of the survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion.
第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption
The author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that.... However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption. In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that.... Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility
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发表于 2014-6-5 13:29:36 | 显示全部楼层

又见七宗罪
那个也就是参考一下
具体写的时候如果照搬
会死得很惨的吧……
考官都要看吐了
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发表于 2014-6-5 13:47:23 | 显示全部楼层

开头
The argument in the ________, at first glance, may sound like a well-reasoned logical position, backed by rigorous data of various sorts. But when put under close and critical examination, none of those data used in the reasoning process manages to carry through as weighty support of the argument.
开头
The assertion that ______ is not worth believing because the reasoning process, which leads to this conclusion, involves illegitimate analogy between _____________.
开头
The argument is unsound due to the lack of solid supporting evidence to substantiate the prediction made in it. The phenomena cited in the reasoning process of the argument are either indirect, hence weak, or, even worse, indicative of a trend other than the one assumed by the arguer.
开头
The assertion that_____ is poorly reasoned. Owing to its failure to certify the cause and effect factors and its simplistic use of analogy, the conclusion reached in the argument is invaild and probably misleading.
错误类比 A=》B
The argument is based on a false analogy.
Theoretically every object or system in the world is in certain respects unique. Yet practically speaking, people and things tend to look and act a lot alike. When there are enough similarities between two things, we can assume the claim that what is true of one is also true of the other. The key condition here for sound reasoning from analogy is that the two things must share characteristics relevant to the claim being made and does not have differences that would destroy the analogy. In the case of A and B, however, the condition for making analogical comparison in terms of future business prospect is not ripe.
错误类比
When drawing on the experience of other people’s success, we need to analyze the exact cause or causes of their success and make sure that sufficient similarities do exist between them and us to entail that what works for them will also work for us. Otherwise, the rote imitation is far from learning and may lead us to nowhere.
错误因果 A先于B发生=》A导致B
Simply because A happens before B does not mean that there is causal correlation between them, That is, that the change in one has caused the change in the other. To conduct an experiment to establish the causal relation between two events, variables should be controlled to the extent that the tested variable is the only one that undergoes some changes. Under this condition, should any changes follows, it can be attributed to tested variable with reasonable plausibility. In the case of _____.
错误因果 after this , because of this
the author has engaged in “after this, therefore because of this” reasoning. The only reason offered for believing that -___________ is the fact that the former preceded the latter. No additional evidence linking the two events is offered in the argument, thus leaving open the possibility that the two events are not causally related but merely correlated. This in turn leaves open the possibility that factors other than the one cited are responsible for __________.
错误决策
It is logically wrong to impose a dichotomous choice to a matter when there are more than two alternatives. In order to make the best decision as to how to cope with the observed problem, the cause of the problem must be accurately identified.
错误决策
The solution to a certain problem must be based on a clear understanding of the cause of the problem and the solution thus shaped should be able to address either the cause or the result of the problem. Logically incorrect or inaccurate causal relation, on the other hand, will lead to solutions irrelevant, and hence ineffective, to the problem in hand.
错误决策
When making decisions on alternatives, we should consider all the important benefits and setbacks associated with various alternatives and weigh them against each other to evaluate them comprehensively and choose the one with the greatest overall benefit.
错误决策
The author is presenting a false dilemma by imposing an either-or choice between two courses of action that need not be mutually exclusive.
错误类推 过去推知未来
When samples are used to make general claims about a particular group, the sample should be close enough in time to the generalization they are used to support, so that historical changes will not invalidate the generalization.______ Data obtained from the current samples can not be applied mechanically to the future group.
错误类推 单个=》全部
The author committed a logical fallacy known as hasty generalization. The author used the individual case of _______ as the sole example to reach a sweeping conclusion that _______.
In logic, if a certain relationship is repeatedly found in many events sharing a certain characteristics, then we may predict with a fair degree of safety that relationship will be found in other event of that nature. This reasoning process from individual cases to generalization is called inductive reasoning, and is reliable only on the condition that the general conclusion is based on observation of sufficient amount of individual event. In the case of the argument presented here,, however, the general characterization of ___________ is reached by citing only one single example, which is far from enough to render the conclusion as reliable and trustworthy.
调查错误 采样错误
When making general claims about a certain group, or “kind”, of people, we need to examine a sufficiently large and representative sample of the “kind” in question. To properly administer a questionnaire survey, a sample of the group should be selected, based on a carefully thought-out set of criteria, as representing all the people of the “kind” to be including in the generalization. Only in this way can we claim that what is true of the sample is very likely to be true of the group as a whole.
错误调查
The poll cited by the author is described in the vaguest possible terms. The ad does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded, or how the poll was conducted. Until these questions are answered, the survey results are worthless as evidence for public opinion about
错误关联
However, the evidence revealed in their research establishes only a positive correlation between ______ and the __________ ; it does not establish a causal connection between them. Other factors, such as ________ and _______could be responsible for
结尾
In its attempt to solve the problem, the company needs to consider all the factors affecting its profitability and weigh them over each other in order to make the optimal decision. If is fails to find out the real cause of its weakening profitability and acts on some plausible beliefs, the problem will never get effectively addressed.
结尾
Due to the fundamental flaw in the inductive reasoning process and severe lack of necessary information, the conclusion reached in the argument is highly suspicious and has little power to convince.
结尾
The argument would be strengthened if the author were to consider and rule out other significant factors that might have caused the increase in visits to the local art museum.
结尾
Based on the reasons I listed above, the argument is not completely sound. The evidence in support of the conclusion does little to prove the conclusion since it does not address the assumptions I have already raised. Ultimately, the argument might have been more convincing by making it clear that
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